Help Please

Would one of you sort the statement below out please i'm wanting to use it on the site when new members visit but i'm useless at this sort of thing could you sort out the spelling punctuation and wording please




Hello and welcome to THE PRIDE OF YORKSHIRE,
This forum was set up on the 5th of September 2009, in order to give Yorkshire football fans a place to come and interact with fellow fans of all 10 league clubs in our county, although this is a controlled environment with each team having there own forum and Moderator to make sure every one as equal rights. The main reason this forum was set up, was to give its members a little more freedom to express them self's, then what other multi club forums allow, but that said Please keep it civil and if your not prepared to do so, don't bother registering, not liking a club and letting everyone know your fellings about there club is fine, but personal abuse of other members will not be tolerated and will result in a permanent ban, there are also other forums on the site that you can not view untill you are registered and once registered the ad's at the top of the page will disappear too
"THANK YOU" for visiting THE PRIDE OF YORKSHIRE and we hope to see you posting on the site in the future

Hello and welcome to THE PRIDE OF YORKSHIRE.

This forum was set up on the 5th of September 2009 in order to give Yorkshire football fans a place to come and interact with fellow fans of all 10 league clubs in our county.

We operate a controlled environment, with each team having their own forum and moderator, to ensure everyone as equal rights. The main reason this forum was set up, was to allow its members the freedom to express themselves without the restraints some other 'multi-club' forums adopt.

However, abuse will not be tolerated. Please keep discussions civil. If you are not prepared to behave appropiately, please don't register. Friendly banter between rival clubs is encouraged, personal abuse will result in a permanent ban.

Some sections of this forum are restricted to members, so to enjoy the full benefits of the site please register. Registered users also enjoy this website without the advertisements at the top of the page.

THANK YOU for visiting THE PRIDE OF YORKSHIRE and we hope to see you posting here in the future.

Phil


That would be my suggestion.

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Phil wrote:Wow Miss Wedneday your a star that's perfect thank you

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Please correct ''everyone as equal rights'' to 'everyone HAS equal rights'........A pedant.